NATALIA-WELL I KNOW WE WERE THE ONLY STUDENTS LEFT AROUND IN SCHOOL BUT….
JOSH-ALL WE WERE DOING WAS PLANNING OUR MUSIC VIDEO
Cut to clip of Shanice singing
BEN-WELL I CAME IN LATE, SO AS SOON AS I CAME, THE GROUP WAS ALL READY TO GO.
Cut to clip of group walking out
NATALIA-I REMEMBER HEARING SHANICE SAY SHE WAS GOING BACK FOR HER PHONE (voice over for clip when shanice says she’s going back for her phone)
NATALIA-THEN I JUST HEARD
Cut to clip of Shanice screaming around in M7
SCREAMING!
TEACHER-WELL WAS SHE ALRIGHT?
BEN VOICEOVER-WELL I ASSUME SO BECAUSE WE STILL HAD THE CAMERA WITH US. I WAS STILL RECORDING. IT WAS ME, MARCO AND NATALIA JUST MESSING AROUND. I TURNED TO FILM SHANICE BUT SHE WAS JUST TAKING HER TIME. I TURNED BACK AROUND AND SHE WAS JUST IN MY FACE! FROM THEN ON I KNEW THERE WAS SOMETHING WRONG WITH HER.
JOSH-WE CARRIED ON WALKING AND I ASKED KAYDEN WHAT WAS WRONG WITH HER. I LOOKED BACK AND SAW NATALIA TALKING TO SHANICE.
NATALIA-SHANICE LOOKED SO SCARED, WE WERE MESSING ABOUT WITH THE CAMERA (until now it is a voiceover to clip until Shanice panicks)
AND SHE JUST STARTED PANICKING
SHE JUST PAN…….NICKE…D (breathing heavy starting to pass out) AND…..I….
SCRIPT IMPROVED PLUS FILM DIRECTIONS
BEGIN WITH NATALIA WALKING TOWARDS 6 FORM BLOCK.
BEN AND JOSH LOOK NERVOUS WAITING OUTSIDE THE OFFICE
TEACHER-SO NATALIA WOULD YOU LIKE TO EXPLAIN WHAT EXACTLY HAPPENED LAST NIGHT?
NATALIA-WELL I KNOW WE WERE THE ONLY STUDENTS LEFT AROUND IN SCHOOL BUT….
JOSH-ALL WE WERE DOING WAS SOME GROUP WORK
HONEST, AND YEAH WE ENDED UP LEAVNG RATHER LATE (scratch neck looking nervous)
Cut to clip of Group getting up
BEN-WELL I CAME IN LATE, AS SOON AS I CAME IN THE GROUP WAS ALL READY TO GO.
Cut to clip of group walking out
NATALIA-WE WERE HEADING OUT OF M BLOCK BUT SHANICE SAID SHE HAD LEFT HER PHONE SO SHE WENT BACK FOR IT.
cut to clip of Shanice saying she’s going to get her phone
BEN-I COULD SLIGHTLY SEE HER THROUGH ONE OF THE SIDE WINDOWS, I NOTICED THAT WHEN SHE REACHED FOR HER PHONE SHE LOOKED TROUBLED,………….. BUT STILL SHANICE HAS ALWAYS BEEN WIERD
JOSH-SHE’S KINDA CRAZY……YEAH UMM YEAH SHE’S ODD
TEACHER-OK SO YOUR SAYING SHE’S RATHER CRAZY DOES THAT HAVE SOMETHING TO DO WITH WHY M7 WAS LEFT IN SUCH A STATE…OR ARE THERE THINGS YOU AREN’T TELLING ME HMM
NATALIA-SIR HONESTLY IT WASN’T US, THE BOYS AND I WERE WAITING OUTSIDE M BLOCK, SHANICE WAS TAKING HER TIME I ASSUME SHE MIGHT HAVE BEEN ON THE PHONE….SO WE WAITED
JOSH-FOR A WHILE
BEN-A LONG WHILE
NATALIA-I WAS ABOUT TO GO GET HER WHEN SUDDENLY I HEARD….
JOSH-SCREAMING (act more hesitant, use more angles)
Cut to clip of Shanice screaming around in M7
TEACHER-SCREAMING!
WELL WAS SHE ALRIGHT?
BEN,NATALIA AND JOSH-WE DON’T KNOW! (echo words) (VOICE OVER CLIP IN WHICH OPENING SEQUENCE ENDS) (clip where shanice hits the window)
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